New story... new reel... Yes, I've received a bit of criticism about the narrative and the general story flow and character development throughout. So here is a new concept, which ended up being a lot more cheezy and fairly tacky even, but is certainly tidier and makes much more sense (in terms of beginning, middle and end). Hope you like it.

 

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